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♣Bad life♣
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♣Bad life♣
by Hanan Wed Jan 14, 2009 7:26 am
Bad lifeLife is something so hard,
Love is something so rare.
When I was a child,
I used to play as an angel,
To fly without wings;
With an innocent soul-I was.
Life is something so hard,
Love is something so rare.
I dreamt of a family
In which we are together-forever,
Full of happiness, tenderness,
And love
Life is something so hard,
Love is something so rare.
I saw my parents fighting,
I saw them all the time..
Staying alone and crying
And asking my self:
Why? Why? And why?
Once-A day,
I heard a strange voice telling me:
"Life is something so hard,
Love is something so rare."
Whom can I support,
My MUM or my DAD?
But I love them both..
Life is something so hard,
Love is something so rare.
Love is something so rare.
When I was a child,
I used to play as an angel,
To fly without wings;
With an innocent soul-I was.
Life is something so hard,
Love is something so rare.
I dreamt of a family
In which we are together-forever,
Full of happiness, tenderness,
And love
Life is something so hard,
Love is something so rare.
I saw my parents fighting,
I saw them all the time..
Staying alone and crying
And asking my self:
Why? Why? And why?
Once-A day,
I heard a strange voice telling me:
"Life is something so hard,
Love is something so rare."
Whom can I support,
My MUM or my DAD?
But I love them both..
Life is something so hard,
Love is something so rare.
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Re: ♣Bad life♣
by saidkarim Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:30 am
Pity sister !
Don't put yourself into parents' comparison.. & don't think you're the only one having parents' problems... If you're not satisfied with your situation, remember always that there are orphan peoples wishing only to have a Mom or Dad...
All what you have to do is to respect them to satisfy your God.. Then, you will realise
that Love is not rare & life is so beautiful when it's spent close to Allah
I advise you as well as myself
May Allah Forgive us...
Don't put yourself into parents' comparison.. & don't think you're the only one having parents' problems... If you're not satisfied with your situation, remember always that there are orphan peoples wishing only to have a Mom or Dad...
All what you have to do is to respect them to satisfy your God.. Then, you will realise
that Love is not rare & life is so beautiful when it's spent close to Allah
I advise you as well as myself
May Allah Forgive us...
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Re: ♣Bad life♣
by Hanan Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:00 am
Fistly, I would like to thank you for your comment. Secondly, I want to clarify sth for you; the content of the poem does not reflect my own experience, it's just an imaginary situation that a lot of people are everyday in contact with. Finally, I am proud of my parents and may Allah keep them to all people, forever.
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Re: ♣Bad life♣
by Mohamed LAHRI Thu Jan 15, 2009 4:36 am
My hands join yours to ask God for keeping every one's parents. Nice verses. Go on.
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Re: ♣Bad life♣
by saidkarim Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:41 am
thank you sister twice :
1st, for your sad, dark, pessimist & suicidal ideas about life.
2nd, for your clarification about your real life by a nice, shocking, strict & furious way.
Ohhh, by the way, let your poems reflect your experiences... Or else... you know the rest...
1st, for your sad, dark, pessimist & suicidal ideas about life.
2nd, for your clarification about your real life by a nice, shocking, strict & furious way.
Ohhh, by the way, let your poems reflect your experiences... Or else... you know the rest...
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Re: ♣Bad life♣
by hammani12 Sun Sep 25, 2011 11:27 am
The content is clear and simple. But, this is not a poem.
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Re: ♣Bad life♣
by hammani12 Sun Sep 25, 2011 11:31 am
You could have chosen other vocabulary items to convey your real feelingsss xxx good start...
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