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My beloved one
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My beloved one
My Beloved ONE
I waited for a long term
Hopefully that she would return;
With a smile on her face,
She would meet me in the place.
The clouds of the sky
Created the tears in my eye;
I didn't know that it was a sign
For my heart to cry..
Iam sad..
Iam in a bad temper..
Iam about to be mad
Because of your absence..
I wish you could be here..
I wish I could be there..
Just wanna be with you-Once more,
Opening the closed door;
The door of sadness,
The one of madness..
If only you could do it,
My Beloved ONE
I waited for a long term
Hopefully that she would return;
With a smile on her face,
She would meet me in the place.
The clouds of the sky
Created the tears in my eye;
I didn't know that it was a sign
For my heart to cry..
Iam sad..
Iam in a bad temper..
Iam about to be mad
Because of your absence..
I wish you could be here..
I wish I could be there..
Just wanna be with you-Once more,
Opening the closed door;
The door of sadness,
The one of madness..
If only you could do it,
My Beloved ONE
Last edited by Mohamed LAHRI on Tue Jan 13, 2009 10:25 am; edited 1 time in total
Mohamed LAHRI- Number of posts : 35
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Re: My beloved one
Nice rhymes brother! The She-Beloved must be proud of you NO DOUBT...
But I really wish you had written these lines for another Beloved "Our Beloved"...
May Allah be Pleased with you...
But I really wish you had written these lines for another Beloved "Our Beloved"...
May Allah be Pleased with you...
saidkarim- Number of posts : 27
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Re: My beloved one
Great! Keep on trying on different stanza!
hammani12- Number of posts : 4
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Age : 38
Location : Azilal
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